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Can I share a post SEEDS 3rd poem 3rd page i'll continue to read thank you.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 30, 2009 at 3:19 PM
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Re: Well done. T.S. Eliot would be proud...
Kind praise indeed. Thank you.
posted by
SFJoseph
on June 18, 2008 at 8:24 PM
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I, too, sit waiting, and watching. An excellent close! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 18, 2008 at 11:48 AM
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Well done. T.S. Eliot would be proud...
posted by
saul_relative
on June 18, 2008 at 3:07 AM
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Just beautiful! Such a wonderful peice! Very creative and well thought out. I love the pychologics in this. Bravo!
posted by
Nataluna
on June 17, 2008 at 11:23 PM
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Re: Sinome
I am pleased that you liked the poem. I very much felt the cadence of the poem as I was writing it, waiting, watching, as the poem took form on the paper before me.
posted by
SFJoseph
on June 17, 2008 at 9:40 PM
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This is so beautiful and interesting. Again I say it is unique in its perspective and very well written, with a cadence that keeps one's interest till the very end. I enjoyed reading it very much.
posted by
Sinome
on June 17, 2008 at 9:22 PM
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Re: elysianfields
I hardly know what to say. I am overwhelmed by your kind remarks, especially from one so talented as yourself. I am so pleased that you have been enjoying the poetry. I will continue to try and live up to the image of the story teller, hopefully continuing to be great.
posted by
SFJoseph
on June 17, 2008 at 8:56 PM
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Vivid imagery, I could see the whole vision ~ I feel like I'm sitting at your feet, and you are a great story teller ~ this is awesome. I am truly inspired by your poetry. Write on!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 17, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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