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Awsome clever and the love soft one bright one amazing creativity whoa!

Can I share a post SEEDS 3rd poem 3rd page i'll continue to read thank you.

posted by Mystereo on January 30, 2009 at 3:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Well done. T.S. Eliot would be proud...

Kind praise indeed.  Thank you.

posted by SFJoseph on June 18, 2008 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

I, too, sit waiting, and watching. An excellent close! sam

posted by sam444 on June 18, 2008 at 11:48 AM | link to this | reply

Well done. T.S. Eliot would be proud...

posted by saul_relative on June 18, 2008 at 3:07 AM | link to this | reply

Just beautiful!  Such a wonderful peice!  Very creative and well thought out.  I love the pychologics in this.  Bravo! 

posted by Nataluna on June 17, 2008 at 11:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

I am pleased that you liked the poem.  I very much felt the cadence of the poem as I was writing it, waiting, watching, as the poem took form on the paper before me. 

posted by SFJoseph on June 17, 2008 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

This is so beautiful and interesting.  Again I say it is unique in its perspective and very well written, with a cadence that keeps one's interest till the very end.  I enjoyed reading it very much. 

posted by Sinome on June 17, 2008 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

Re: elysianfields

I hardly know what to say. I am overwhelmed by your kind remarks, especially from one so talented as yourself. I am so pleased that you have been enjoying the poetry. I will continue to try and live up to the image of the story teller, hopefully continuing to be great.

posted by SFJoseph on June 17, 2008 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

Vivid imagery, I could see the whole vision ~ I feel like I'm sitting at your feet, and you are a great story teller ~ this is awesome.  I am truly inspired by your poetry.  Write on!~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 17, 2008 at 8:45 PM | link to this | reply