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Now this is poetry at its finest. I will be back again and again.
Thank you for sharing your talent ...
posted by
VictoriaP
on June 12, 2008 at 5:47 PM
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aryaindia
I was astounded by the beautiful ending line "The wisdom of the truth she spells are sprite and for a dash / My soulful yearnings I\'d so cling as though she were sweet rash", as you caught the essence in the best of imagery.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 11, 2008 at 5:31 PM
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posted by
RomaKay
on June 11, 2008 at 12:29 PM
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I agree with Troosha. I was captured with the imagery and the rhyme scheme enhanced the cadence! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 11, 2008 at 11:52 AM
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aryaindia
Writing rhyming poetry is a challenge but I must compliment you as your rhythm is bang on and thus your poetry a delight to read. Your theme of reaching for the rainbow was stunning.
posted by
Troosha
on June 11, 2008 at 10:05 AM
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