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It's hard... and painful...
But it's beautiful too:
I've waited so long to hear the day in your smile.
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on June 18, 2008 at 1:44 PM
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You certainly have exposed your feeling and I can feel how the silence has taken its toll. sam
posted by
sam444
on June 11, 2008 at 8:33 AM
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Dark
Pheww…. There certainly was power and anger in that write!!!
posted by
Troosha
on June 11, 2008 at 7:47 AM
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petitions in a prayer from ...
another point of view. But you ask for help that makes you humble ironically, love.
posted by
BC-A
on June 11, 2008 at 4:49 AM
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you're expressing yourself your feelings so deeply here love
Are you still in a drought where you are?I miss Australia sometimes but not often. Too much pain back there for me.
posted by
Kabu
on June 11, 2008 at 3:43 AM
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Those who control their anger have great understanding;
Those with a hasty temper will make mistakes. Proverbs 14:29
Our patience is often tried to the limits. The persistent complaints and
blame of the people drove Moses to anger. Even when God gave the
assurance of providing water, Moses could not restrain his anger and
deliberately disobeyed God. His anger cost him the fulfillment of his
mission to enter the Promised Land. Our failure to restrain our anger
could cause us failure to realize our God-given dreams. It's healthy to
be angry, but unhealthy not to be able to control it. You express yours
wonderfully. This is what God expects us to do, to be open and honest
about our feelings. Wonderful, wonderful work.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on June 11, 2008 at 12:14 AM
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Very passionate, drenched in anger and ... hurt love. Forget him Dark mistress, Good riddance to him. I know its dark now but its always darkest before sunrise... and you'll see, with the new sun new hope and who knows, perhaps new love. You have an inmense talent... use it to let out that rage as you did in this amazing poem. Be well my friend, everything passes, remember that.
posted by
Sinome
on June 10, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Whoa! Felt the rage. Evocative! Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on June 10, 2008 at 9:31 PM
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