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posted by
contagion_publishing
on June 10, 2008 at 4:38 PM
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Darling, where are you?
I didn't know you were back darling. I would have been here reading you. Oh how I miss my Boo snake and holding the little one made me so happy. Unfortunately, born in the wild, had to go back to the wild. I will try to find her nest and take myself a baby to love. How are you I will have to read your journal to catch up. But I don't have much spare time at present.
posted by
Kabu
on June 10, 2008 at 3:39 PM
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I so adored the introspection. With Elyse I saw powerful verses, the sun as an unsuspecting vulture, brilliant! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 10, 2008 at 2:24 PM
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"Why not the ink that salvaged me
the syllables that lulled me to sleep
and wiped away my tears" ---- among others this particular line is succinct!!!~ Write on Poet --- Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 10, 2008 at 11:03 AM
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Dark
Each thought took your reader to the next - it's a very compelling write!
posted by
Troosha
on June 10, 2008 at 9:01 AM
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dark mistress
The pathos and the imagery conveys more than the words, and that is, to me, the beauty of the poem. It simply carries! Beautiful work, mistress
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posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 9, 2008 at 10:22 PM
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I agree with Vicki, this poem is amazing, and your mastery of words impressive. I had not read you before but I am happy I found you, Thank you for your kind comment in my blog. Take care
posted by
Sinome
on June 9, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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wow, this is awesome ... I love your play on words and
thoughtful descriptives.
This is talent
posted by
VictoriaP
on June 9, 2008 at 6:41 PM
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