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So full of images!
posted by
Straightforward
on June 8, 2008 at 10:06 PM
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This is stupendous! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 7, 2008 at 1:45 PM
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This is a beautiful poem! Wonderful read---loved it!
posted by
Nataluna
on June 7, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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Very beautifull, very well done
posted by
Kayzzaman
on June 7, 2008 at 9:58 AM
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Love your work, you are so talented....The last line almost made me cry...
"No place to be found" I like happy endings. Great Work Awesome writings
Solitar
posted by
mothernature
on June 7, 2008 at 9:13 AM
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A stunning and powerful piece..The imagery is very vivid and the flow of verse is dazzling..
posted by
Wigopa_
on June 7, 2008 at 8:17 AM
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Re: I see a new name ...
Thanks so much for your comment, and compliment. I am so glad that someone is seeing the messages that I try to keep within my poetry. I feel that every poetry needs a deeper meaning, or else, for me at least, it is just words on a page. Thanks for your continued readership.
posted by
Character_creator
on June 7, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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I see a new name ...
I enjoy your posts. I must say that I experience total awesomeness from your tale in poetry. Oh gosh the message and meanings overwhelm me. Peace on earth, love! Excellent!
posted by
BC-A
on June 7, 2008 at 7:43 AM
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