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Broken pieces of you
Beautiful poetry, poignant, your personal feelings, but a near-universal experience....time does heal, and hearts are renewed and refilled.

Courtjester


posted by Courtjester on June 7, 2008 at 10:50 AM | link to this | reply

Oh, you been away? Didn't notice because I just got out of my time capsule. As always--a clear and vibrant inner voice elocuting thru time as drama.

John

posted by jfm32 on June 6, 2008 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you for the comment Jen ... glad you are back and writing again!

posted by VictoriaP on June 6, 2008 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

Good day Jen ~ what a surprise  ~ I just got in today and found your words on my blog ~ and now this --- oh but wow, I was just thinking about you like all week and today was prepared to send you an email...So glad you are here Angel ~ WRITE ON!!!!~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on June 6, 2008 at 4:12 PM | link to this | reply

glad you are back and stay well

posted by Lanetay on June 6, 2008 at 3:18 PM | link to this | reply

Welcome home sweet one.

posted by Justi on June 6, 2008 at 12:32 PM | link to this | reply

My dearest Jen..It is so great to have you back..I am so happy that you are feeling well enough to come back to us..You are always in my prayers...Hugs my friend!

posted by Wigopa_ on June 6, 2008 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply

Welcome back!

posted by shelly_b on June 6, 2008 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

Just to keep in touch!

 

Hi there my dear Mermaid! Great to have you back. Very proud to have  a great Filipino poetess in Blogit! Mabuhay ang Pilipino! Inviting you to read Island Dreams, my new entry tonight. I know you can relate. Hope to meet you, dearie!

Mayflower

posted by MAYFLOWER on June 6, 2008 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

a chase from afar ...
 with intentions to make relationships art provides beautiful poetry. I used to go to a Filipino-owned coffee shop that played karaoke.

posted by BC-A on June 6, 2008 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Purple
   Welcome back, sweet poetress.....

posted by Troosha on June 6, 2008 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful, and we're glad you're back!

posted by Ariala on June 6, 2008 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

... i feel your whole heart in this ... love is the most powerful force in nature ... moon

posted by magic_moon on June 6, 2008 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply

I saw you at my blog! I love you, mom!!!!!!!!!

posted by sam444 on June 6, 2008 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

welcome back angel--hope u are well and healed by His sunshine. Sonshine?

shalom

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posted by ILLUMINATI8 on June 6, 2008 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

This poem has a pervading sense of...
pure sweetness.  It's words are kind and carefully put together for a warm greeting.  It's an instant smile-maker!  I'm sure many people will be very happy for your return and the lovely poem that you've brought with you!!

posted by NiteTide on June 6, 2008 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply