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Re: The poems and the whole story are indeed inspired by
... folk songs and folk tales about the Great War.
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on May 28, 2008 at 1:19 AM
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Very well done and has that note of originality which is unique. Keep it ip
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 27, 2008 at 10:31 PM
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I could feel the shame...
while I was reading. This is very well written. I posted a poem called "The Master of Manipulation" this evening. I wrote it at a time I was carrying a big load of shame!
Talia
posted by
versatalia
on May 27, 2008 at 10:21 PM
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Wow! so very well scripted! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 27, 2008 at 1:15 PM
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I can't really pinpoint it, but this poem seems to have a similar energy to a folk tale. Very well done.
posted by
jmh256
on May 27, 2008 at 12:14 PM
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Your originality is amazing!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 27, 2008 at 10:26 AM
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