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~write on!!!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 25, 2008 at 7:20 PM
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...hmmm..born poet...
posted by
_mai_
on May 23, 2008 at 11:20 PM
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thats the same thing i want to say
when your heart bumbps into mine ,is a great line, leaving so many thought options for the reader for that split second until the next line is read.
great job
posted by
twomany
on May 23, 2008 at 12:04 AM
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'Your heart bumps into mine' is a tremendous line! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 22, 2008 at 10:52 AM
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