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Excellent imagery! I love getting lost in your poetry! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 18, 2008 at 4:41 PM
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It smells lovely and sweet
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 18, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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the sweetnes of sugar
is probably what angels taste like,this is a very nice poem to greet you in the am.thank you.
Im glad you like "every action from your past,your future has become" it took me a lot longer than usual to decide on that line,to leave it or change it or....? But it came ok,thanks for reading and reviewing
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twomany
on May 18, 2008 at 6:41 AM
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