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Excellent poem :-) Loved image of the caged trying to escape. :-)
posted by
Sinome
on May 17, 2008 at 8:54 PM
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I thought was fantastic. It is well organized and laden with imagery! Well done indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 16, 2008 at 5:02 PM
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Great poem. You captured the desperation of the lost souls. Loved the images that gave me a terrorful picture which framed your words just right. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on May 15, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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