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so beautiful!!!!!!

posted by RomaKay on May 18, 2008 at 6:39 PM | link to this | reply

soulfelt

This was heartfelt....took me to a personal home going service, where the same emotions were experienced.  I pray you have peace.

 TThanks also for your comments on my poem.

posted by Rexx_D_Artist on May 14, 2008 at 10:18 PM | link to this | reply

very sad.  Nice reading.  i appreciate your comments on my bog too.  thanks.

posted by safriyie on May 14, 2008 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

Lady

I could feel the pain....

posted by Troosha on May 14, 2008 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

That was so beautiful!

You will be able to continue forward eventually, I promise.

posted by LostInLife on May 14, 2008 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

This is a poignant piece, so reflective of the pain in loss.  sam

posted by sam444 on May 14, 2008 at 6:03 AM | link to this | reply

Very well expressed mourning

I feel a passion here; well done; thank you and God bless

posted by mariaki on May 14, 2008 at 2:17 AM | link to this | reply

Very touching..

Your words stir up emotions softly! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on May 13, 2008 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

This just moves me to actual tears ~ this is a very poignant poem. Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 13, 2008 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

I can't even imagine the author's pain ... very beautifully and

movingly written.  God bless and keep you.

posted by Departed1 on May 13, 2008 at 6:05 PM | link to this | reply

Amazingly sweet and sad poem.  Such pain comes through these lines that I would dare anyone that has an ounce of sensibility to read it and not weep.  I am so sorry for your loss.  BEliev

posted by Sinome on May 13, 2008 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

i'm sorry to hear that my dear...you wrote it with so much passion and sadness...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on May 13, 2008 at 5:09 PM | link to this | reply

such moving words

i'm deeply reached by your emotions

posted by pelagus on May 13, 2008 at 5:00 PM | link to this | reply

This poem was quite touching.

posted by jmh256 on May 13, 2008 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply