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Very impressive...
...and transcendent. You obviously put a lot of thought into this.
posted by
metalrat
on May 17, 2008 at 6:54 AM
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Well Done
So enjoyed this - thangs. GtDP
posted by
Gandalph
on May 16, 2008 at 1:56 AM
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comes together beautifully(all the Metrop. pieces)-this one is like huge breath and sigh at the end-
great descrptions (always:))
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on May 15, 2008 at 12:22 PM
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Beautiful poem, your light shines through it and energizes the readers. Great job!!!
posted by
Sinome
on May 14, 2008 at 8:43 PM
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This is Beautiful!
Great words. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 13, 2008 at 10:17 PM
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I agree it is like your words are alive on the page..Awesome work!
posted by
Wigopa_
on May 13, 2008 at 8:53 PM
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I feel so alive when reading your poetry ~ I read and re-read and at times re-read several times because I enjoy how the words, and imagery just play off my tongue ~ Stunning and alive!!! ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on May 13, 2008 at 8:34 PM
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outstanding my friend...cleverly worded!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 13, 2008 at 5:26 PM
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Gorgeous poem. I loved these lines:
There are countless
Frangible truths
Shattered on the
Mirror of her nightsky
Spread wordlessly
Adoring every song
Contains my heart
posted by
jmh256
on May 13, 2008 at 3:37 PM
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Shattered!
...On the mirror of her NIGHTSKY! YES!
posted by
CRShelley
on May 13, 2008 at 3:03 PM
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Such expressive imagery! Congratulations!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 13, 2008 at 2:55 PM
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hi its ladydew
hi! I like this writing alot of thought very expressive! ty for great read! ladydew
posted by
ladydew
on May 13, 2008 at 1:33 PM
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Very good and meaningful..
posted by
Katray2
on May 13, 2008 at 12:58 PM
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Wow...how cool is that? Excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 13, 2008 at 12:54 PM
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