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A great kiss..A memorable thing...Lovely

posted by Wigopa_ on May 7, 2008 at 9:52 PM | link to this | reply

great write my dear!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on May 7, 2008 at 4:29 AM | link to this | reply

" Two bodies strung together in perfect form" -nice !
  

posted by NighthawkNY on May 6, 2008 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

said it all......

posted by Star5_ on May 6, 2008 at 10:09 PM | link to this | reply

Wow! Fantastic.

posted by Kolekshuns on May 6, 2008 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice ~ smooth and evocative ELyse

posted by elysianfields on May 6, 2008 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply

Passion has a righteous expression in marriage. Apart from that, it is dark side indulgences. My 2 cents!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on May 6, 2008 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

This is very good!  sam

posted by sam444 on May 6, 2008 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on May 6, 2008 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

It's simply beautiful .

posted by afzal50 on May 6, 2008 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely

posted by jmh256 on May 6, 2008 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply