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for me it was like is Mother earth claiming you as one of hers...

posted by bluehands on May 6, 2008 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

Great imagery

posted by jmh256 on May 6, 2008 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

Good morning. I am doing better today, how about you? Love to you forever my dear, mom!

posted by sam444 on May 6, 2008 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

Jump off the wire and hope to be caught? Takes a very brave woman to do that. Great poem my dear and a haunting picture to match. You know, everything to do with water and the ocean fascinates me. I am soo pleased to see more entries of yours, so obviously you are better.

posted by vogue on May 6, 2008 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply

LIFE

CAN BE TOUGH, REALITY HITS HARD SOMETIMES. WONDERFULLY WRITTEN, AS USUAL YOU NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME. jesse

posted by jesse_jean on May 6, 2008 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply

Sooooo beautiful.

  As always!

posted by Kolekshuns on May 6, 2008 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

Such a beautifully haunting piece dear Jen......

I have missed you so; I hope you are well and thank you for the awesome poetry; God bless dear heart

posted by mariaki on May 6, 2008 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply

Five 's Jen..Just lovely..

posted by Wigopa_ on May 5, 2008 at 11:14 PM | link to this | reply

embracing love, does wonders for the soul!

posted by yellowrose55 on May 5, 2008 at 10:45 PM | link to this | reply

awesome....

posted by 9STAR on May 5, 2008 at 9:50 PM | link to this | reply

Sooo beautiful,  the songs really ad a lot to the presentation but the poem is marvelous on its own :-)

posted by Sinome on May 5, 2008 at 7:52 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Mermaid

I love it!! I missed your work while I was gone... :)

posted by Loribeth215 on May 5, 2008 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

...it sounds like love to me...moon

posted by magic_moon on May 5, 2008 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

So much depth...you are doing well Dear Jen ~ so much through your writing.  So touching ~ u Elyse

posted by elysianfields on May 5, 2008 at 6:30 PM | link to this | reply

Reality is tougher indeed !

posted by afzal50 on May 5, 2008 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

yes sweetheart very beautiful

posted by Kabu on May 5, 2008 at 6:00 PM | link to this | reply

Purple Mermaid, sensual imagery, romantic movement, excellent!

posted by BC-A on May 5, 2008 at 5:43 PM | link to this | reply