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this painted a beautiful canvas to mealmost like an experience u need/like to have

posted by bumpsinaroad on May 6, 2008 at 7:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: This is beautiful

I know Kauzzaman, I have missed you :-)  Thanks for coming in today 

posted by Sinome on May 5, 2008 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Beautiful writing.

thank you so much Kolekshuns :-)

posted by Sinome on May 5, 2008 at 7:38 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much Les, you are so sweet :-)

posted by Sinome on May 5, 2008 at 7:38 PM | link to this | reply

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Glad you liked it Sam :-)

posted by Sinome on May 5, 2008 at 6:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: very vivid

It is indeed a high compliment  Starr childe, when a poet makes a reader cry.  Thank you so much :-)

posted by Sinome on May 5, 2008 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Thank you Troosha,  you are always so kind :-)

posted by Sinome on May 5, 2008 at 3:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: This is a very nice poem! I liked it a lot!

Thank you Old Dutchman, 

posted by Sinome on May 5, 2008 at 2:54 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you so much NightawkNY :-)

posted by Sinome on May 5, 2008 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply

"So I too ask it to wash all the shadows" -nice!

posted by NighthawkNY on May 5, 2008 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

This is a very nice poem! I liked it a lot!

posted by The_Lost_Dutchman on May 5, 2008 at 11:44 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

You describe the cleansing sensation of rain so beautifully.  At times we initially view it as a negative (as the beginning of your poem described) but if we allow it, it can provide us a moment of blissful peace.  I loved the progression of this piece….

posted by Troosha on May 5, 2008 at 10:31 AM | link to this | reply

very vivid

love the bit about the linen dress and wet hair, and the last few lines gave me a lump in my throat

posted by starr_childe on May 5, 2008 at 9:03 AM | link to this | reply

I really like this poem.  sam

posted by sam444 on May 5, 2008 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply

 PS That's a good thang! LeStAte7

posted by lestate7 on May 5, 2008 at 3:40 AM | link to this | reply

dOpe !

posted by lestate7 on May 5, 2008 at 3:39 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful writing.

posted by Kolekshuns on May 5, 2008 at 12:04 AM | link to this | reply

This is beautiful

I have not read your post for a long time, Marta.

posted by Kayzzaman on May 4, 2008 at 11:28 PM | link to this | reply

i know what you mean my dear...you are a very strong woman...and such a strong love...he is so lucky to have you my dear...you captured this yet again so heartfelt my dear...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on May 4, 2008 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply