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very talented. That last line might have been, to all the men I've
given in, and all that are to come. But your ending is perfect. 

posted by scriber on May 3, 2008 at 5:16 AM | link to this | reply

Nice work!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on May 2, 2008 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

posted by RomaKay on May 2, 2008 at 4:58 PM | link to this | reply

This a grand plea and a very cool form! Bravo!  sam

posted by sam444 on May 2, 2008 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

Well done. I like the method you chose. It was pretty.

posted by dpaulinomorris24 on May 2, 2008 at 2:50 PM | link to this | reply

Christie ~.~
Nicely done! --and you're right..."Amen" was a perfect close for this piece (the second syllable is forgiven.) Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on May 2, 2008 at 2:44 PM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on May 2, 2008 at 12:25 PM | link to this | reply

Splendid words

posted by Kayzzaman on May 2, 2008 at 12:18 PM | link to this | reply

excellent

posted by 9STAR on May 2, 2008 at 12:01 PM | link to this | reply

I'm impressed by your desire; you make it sing.

posted by scriber on May 2, 2008 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

Nice post, thanks for sharing and keep writing. From my  to your .

posted by cmhnord on May 2, 2008 at 11:26 AM | link to this | reply

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