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I could just feel the need to find the human being that would put such a hurt on a child.
I could relate. I felt the child's pain . Mmmph, I could see his face...Mmmph...this was touching.
posted by
Rexx_D_Artist
on May 14, 2008 at 10:31 PM
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... your issue belongs in the realm of prayer and counseling. Keep up the good work of giving information through your creative writing, love. I'm sorry about what happened with my comment, love. The cursor's jumping! In the words of Martin Luther,
get behind me Satan!
posted by
BC-A
on May 1, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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I've written posts on issues such as the world street children and Britney ...
posted by
BC-A
on May 1, 2008 at 7:11 PM
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Inform us
Spears. I often ask questions on family issues after light short short fiction. I read that you have fun, writing. This poem's on a serious issue that belongs in the realm of prayer and I've written posts that are based on issues such as the world street children and Britneycounseling. Keep up the good work of information through your creative writing, love.
posted by
BC-A
on May 1, 2008 at 7:10 PM
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very well developed and moving poem
posted by
scriber
on May 1, 2008 at 1:26 PM
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Extremely poignant and such a terrible reality! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 1, 2008 at 12:12 PM
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Very sad but true state of affairs for many kids!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 1, 2008 at 11:15 AM
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Very well written
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 1, 2008 at 10:17 AM
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So very well written but oh so very sad ! I wonder-what did you do? Did you
contact the child authorities/police perhaps too? Bless his Heart--and yours for having to witness his pain and sadness! I'm not writing more 'cause I'm getting quite angry with his father! God Bless you.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on May 1, 2008 at 9:30 AM
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And? Did you help him? Take him somewhere safe? I'm sure you didn't walk away.
posted by
vogue
on May 1, 2008 at 9:28 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on May 1, 2008 at 8:32 AM
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Very touching, gripping, and sad. This breaks my
. Excelent write, keep sharing. What did you end up doing? I think I would have called children and youth. We have to protect our children cause they are our future. From my
to your
.
posted by
cmhnord
on May 1, 2008 at 8:13 AM
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