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I also applaud!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 2, 2008 at 7:15 PM
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very good
posted by
NighthawkNY
on May 1, 2008 at 5:41 PM
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Good imagery
you can almost smell the reality
posted by
lionreign
on May 1, 2008 at 4:13 AM
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Not bad, even though it is grim. Never flitting, still is sitting....
posted by
WindTapper
on April 30, 2008 at 7:59 PM
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good writing... my own poems rarely meet monsters.Life is good & different
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posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on April 30, 2008 at 7:10 PM
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this is what I though an aunt of mine's mind
must be like! Also reminds me of a story I once read and te name escapes me at the moment but wedding cake was a strong image.....Great Expectations...
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on April 30, 2008 at 5:05 PM
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A Brilliant piece of work CRShelley! I love the pic-too.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 30, 2008 at 12:56 PM
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Excellent work..
posted by
_Symphony_
on April 30, 2008 at 11:32 AM
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Damn those monsters! An excellent poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 30, 2008 at 10:44 AM
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CRS, u can write a poem on anything..good job! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 30, 2008 at 10:37 AM
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beautiful write, I like the darkness behind this, it is a great touch.
posted by
cmhnord
on April 30, 2008 at 7:42 AM
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Wow! That's pretty cool!
Nice work!
posted by
strat
on April 30, 2008 at 5:54 AM
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Great stuff! (Photograph too!) I like the atmosphere of the poem, it's like
... those urban explorations!
posted by
The_Lost_Dutchman
on April 30, 2008 at 5:14 AM
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so intense!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 30, 2008 at 3:52 AM
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Oh yes...
This is what I like!!! Awesome, awesome, awesome...
posted by
TerAmerica
on April 29, 2008 at 10:46 PM
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