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hi sweetie
posted by
Kabu
on April 29, 2008 at 5:22 PM
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Spectacular
posted by
jmh256
on April 29, 2008 at 3:31 PM
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Captivating!
I am just fine. How d'you do, Mermaid?
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 29, 2008 at 10:38 AM
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Outstanding Jen! I was so taken with the imagery and voice. Love you mom.
posted by
sam444
on April 29, 2008 at 9:39 AM
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Purple
Some men see things as they are and say, "Why?" I dream of things that never were and say, "Why not?" ~ George Bernard Shaw
posted by
Troosha
on April 29, 2008 at 8:01 AM
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beautiful...
posted by
_Symphony_
on April 29, 2008 at 3:17 AM
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well said purple mermaid
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 29, 2008 at 2:05 AM
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your writing is amazing! and any comment from you
is a honor!
posted by
lestate7
on April 28, 2008 at 11:48 PM
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Awesome Write! Great job Jen..
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 28, 2008 at 10:51 PM
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Re: My dearest bahskar.....
i'm so sorry dear...I stand corrected....i have made the necessary correction....it's meant to be "shining" dear....sorry.....yet still you are so kind to stress it so subtly, thank you my dear master.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 28, 2008 at 10:38 PM
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My dearest Purple
How did you know dear that I am a sinning maverick
? You must have heard the song "I'm on the top o the world, looking dwn on creation ... and the only expression I can find ..." F A B U L O U S !!! You are my heart's pure joy today. 
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 28, 2008 at 9:53 PM
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Sweet dear Mermaid... yes, dream away and imagine all the great things reality hides from us... Your poem is an invitation to fly high up where pain and bad things can not reach, close to heaven but still here on earth... Sweetie you are so talented, the hope in this poem bathes us with the light of your love. Thank you so much
posted by
Sinome
on April 28, 2008 at 8:21 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 28, 2008 at 7:25 PM
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Look to the stars...and leave the presiding demons unchallenged! Looks like denial to me! Thanks for making me ponder!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 28, 2008 at 6:42 PM
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Oh yes ~ I agree --- BRAVO!!!
My dear Jen, this is so invigorating, inspiring and uplifting I can't imagine anyone not leaving with a smile and
you go!!! write on!!! across their lips
Aww...great poem ~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 28, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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Very magical and alive!
posted by
Ariala
on April 28, 2008 at 6:00 PM
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