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Excellent!
 Love, the narrator makes a point about domestic violence and worst in the Twilight Zone.

posted by BC-A on April 29, 2008 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with Sam. A prequel would be great.

posted by jmh256 on April 28, 2008 at 4:57 PM | link to this | reply

troubled
Now that's a nightmare!  I enjoyed your previous poem, by the way. 

posted by Troosha on April 28, 2008 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re:
 The poem was written after a nightmare, so the inspiration hasn't come to me yet. Glad you like it!

posted by troubledwriter on April 28, 2008 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on April 28, 2008 at 5:02 AM | link to this | reply

This begs for a sequel to the afterlife.  sam

posted by sam444 on April 28, 2008 at 4:33 AM | link to this | reply