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I found this peacefully beautiful..Excellent work!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 17, 2008 at 11:21 PM
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peaceful
I really like the serenity of this poem.
posted by
fluidbeauty
on April 17, 2008 at 2:06 PM
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Very true
posted by
WindTapper
on April 17, 2008 at 1:30 PM
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such a sweet poem
posted by
pelagus
on April 17, 2008 at 11:10 AM
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This is so wonderfully written...awww...like a lullabye - yes ~ this is very soothing ~
~ moved my heart -
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 17, 2008 at 9:20 AM
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Quiet
Would that be amazing if we
could lay upon our beds and gaze into the vastness of the sky (rather than staring at a ceiling). Beautiful piece....
posted by
Troosha
on April 17, 2008 at 8:39 AM
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Now this is imagery in motion. I couldn't wait for the next line. Such a great job! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 17, 2008 at 8:16 AM
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I always watch out for shooting stars and if I see one, I feel blessed.
posted by
vogue
on April 17, 2008 at 7:09 AM
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The immensity of the sky especially at night is mind boggling!
always reminds of the sea because of its vastness; thank you my friend and take care
posted by
mariaki
on April 17, 2008 at 5:40 AM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 17, 2008 at 5:11 AM
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Well expressed. Then you'll get no sleep!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 17, 2008 at 5:08 AM
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Such an amazing picture you create. Your dreams will be
just as angelic.
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 17, 2008 at 4:40 AM
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Lovely quietguy! I watch nightly-but I have not seen a shooting star for
years! Last year there were loads one night but having stayed up to see-I fell asleep just before they cascaded!(So I was told after).Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 17, 2008 at 3:57 AM
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Counting Sheep
Very good writing. I would also prefer to see the sky. It is so
magnificent. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 17, 2008 at 2:30 AM
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