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Stephanie, my talented young friend, just stopping by to say hello...
as promised, haven't heard from u in a while, hope all is well ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 14, 2008 at 9:16 AM
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I like it. Good job.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on April 13, 2008 at 9:47 PM
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THIS WAS SUCH FUN TO READ
posted by
Kabu
on April 13, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Stephanie, life is a series of present moments...
try to live in the present moment and you'll grow with time..you already have a head-start, not just in your writing, but in your inner persona, which is far more important..your friend, Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 13, 2008 at 8:21 PM
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very passionate verse ~ the repetitive tone and words create a haunting - echo of plea or prayer ~ this was awesome
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 13, 2008 at 6:21 PM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 13, 2008 at 5:21 PM
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Bravo!!! Love this, so true!
posted by
RomaKay
on April 13, 2008 at 2:56 PM
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Don't forget that you have many, many moments left
Well expressed verse though you have something
posted by
jefco
on April 13, 2008 at 12:26 PM
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I so agree, our existence is but a cameo appearance in time! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 13, 2008 at 12:21 PM
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Really lovely..
You have caught lifes many phases..Excellent work!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 13, 2008 at 12:05 PM
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