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Re: Nautikos

Thanks, Krisles! And well, yes... 

posted by Nautikos on April 17, 2008 at 4:44 AM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

Of course, it's very clever.....perhaps it's the hour, but does this have a bit of a cynical tone to it?.....I love the imagery of ripples and sand.....I hadn't heard the Dada movement referenced in years! What fun! If it weren't so late, I'd try to find something in an old book....but, I mustn't burn up my vacation hours....I'm soooooo enjoying staying up late....just like a little kid!

posted by Krisles on April 16, 2008 at 12:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: "In a dada world"

Thanks, cheugon...

posted by Nautikos on April 14, 2008 at 6:29 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, Elyse, it means a lot to me that you like it...

posted by Nautikos on April 14, 2008 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, OTA, I really appreciate that...

posted by Nautikos on April 14, 2008 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

"In a dada world"

Nice!

posted by metalrat on April 13, 2008 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

so cool ~ so creative Naut ~ wow  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 13, 2008 at 6:12 PM | link to this | reply

..and waves in the ocean..

well done Naut! What a wonderful surprise to find all these haiku.

posted by OTA. on April 13, 2008 at 12:44 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, CRS!

posted by Nautikos on April 13, 2008 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Well expressed !

Thanks, afzal!

posted by Nautikos on April 13, 2008 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, Sinome!

posted by Nautikos on April 13, 2008 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, sam!

posted by Nautikos on April 13, 2008 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

Well expressed !

posted by afzal50 on April 12, 2008 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on April 12, 2008 at 5:14 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful  :-)

posted by Sinome on April 12, 2008 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

Exciting haiku!   sam

posted by sam444 on April 12, 2008 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply