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Love it!
 I can see this.  Here is a flower for you.

posted by Kolekshuns on April 24, 2008 at 8:02 PM | link to this | reply

An endearing work!
A peaceful feel flows from this..Great work!

posted by Wigopa_ on April 13, 2008 at 1:13 PM | link to this | reply

Soothing, bluehands.  Its like close your eyes to troubles and the vanish.

posted by TAPS. on April 13, 2008 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

calming visuals.  Can close your eyes and see these. 

posted by majesticvisions on April 13, 2008 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful piece

posted by quietguy7 on April 13, 2008 at 1:28 AM | link to this | reply

Shailey ~.~
Very nice, indeed! Well-written. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 12, 2008 at 6:18 PM | link to this | reply

Well written!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on April 12, 2008 at 3:00 PM | link to this | reply

This poem is so effective on so many levels. I am so proud of you!  Bravo!  sam

posted by sam444 on April 12, 2008 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

that is very good view in life my dear...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on April 11, 2008 at 10:37 PM | link to this | reply

very nice bluehands

posted by whirlwindaffair on April 11, 2008 at 10:06 PM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on April 11, 2008 at 9:49 PM | link to this | reply