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Re: Beautiful ! WEll said !
thnk u!!

posted by bumpsinaroad on April 9, 2008 at 1:33 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good job!
thnk u so much

posted by bumpsinaroad on April 9, 2008 at 1:32 PM | link to this | reply

torturous
i love the longing in your words, i can feel how painful...

posted by pelagus on April 9, 2008 at 4:49 AM | link to this | reply

Good job!
 Keep up the good work.

posted by Kolekshuns on April 8, 2008 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on April 8, 2008 at 7:15 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful ! WEll said !

posted by afzal50 on April 8, 2008 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: bumpsinroad ~.~
thank u 4 reading and feelin' it--ss44--t-poet-and u soulspk. 

posted by bumpsinaroad on April 8, 2008 at 4:32 PM | link to this | reply

Grand illustrative imagery. I concur with the other comments!  sam

posted by sam444 on April 8, 2008 at 4:07 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful illustration of need...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on April 8, 2008 at 3:09 PM | link to this | reply

bumpsinroad ~.~
...so earnest --so plaintive -- so beautiful! Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on April 8, 2008 at 2:41 PM | link to this | reply

but love is what keeps me alive :)

posted by bumpsinaroad on April 8, 2008 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

Love can be frustrating...
...when you want to get on with it. Nice poem.

posted by metalrat on April 8, 2008 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply