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It has a beautiful, great message..love it
posted by
whirlwindaffair
on April 6, 2008 at 7:17 AM
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oh my dear.....
posted by
Star5_
on April 6, 2008 at 6:53 AM
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Purple_Mermaid, Great writing. I am pretty much speechless. What a sad thing to write about and yet you do it so beautifully.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 6, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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I wish you could write something on my pain and trouble !
Your poems are so passionate and heartfelt . I love to read them and never miss !
posted by
afzal50
on April 6, 2008 at 6:26 AM
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This is well written. I am at a loss though to find the right expresson. Love always, mom
posted by
sam444
on April 6, 2008 at 5:29 AM
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I love the thoughts in this poem. I know we often act on the impulse and don't stop to think first about what our actions may prevoke, or what they might do to others. We all need to work on this.
posted by
majesticvisions
on April 6, 2008 at 3:56 AM
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Very thought provoking
I love how you used multiple personas for this poem. Completly original
posted by
Loribeth215
on April 5, 2008 at 11:16 PM
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tremendous expression !!!!!
posted by
jefco
on April 5, 2008 at 10:52 PM
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Sweetie, this is very powerful. You are an amazing poet.
posted by
Sinome
on April 5, 2008 at 10:47 PM
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Very well done, J...excellent work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 5, 2008 at 10:01 PM
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