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very nice

truly evil thoughts are real

invading with such dark appeal

stripping comfort with such zeal

in their nightmares they can feel

how our presence turns the wheel

©SMRB

so very real my friend

posted by twomany on April 4, 2008 at 3:46 AM | link to this | reply

Well Done, my friend!!

posted by CRShelley on April 4, 2008 at 3:38 AM | link to this | reply

owners of our own, saviours of each other - really compelling poem

posted by whirlwindaffair on April 4, 2008 at 1:47 AM | link to this | reply