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beautiful as always/I'll be back to read this piece again
I'm ok thank you for checking on me
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on April 4, 2008 at 3:42 PM
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My My
Purple Darling you are so full of color girl...keep it up
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on April 4, 2008 at 11:25 AM
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I just got lost in this outstanding imagery my beautiful daughter. Thank you for the gorgeous pics of my grandchildren. I love them so much, their beauty (handsome Stef) warms my heart and makes me glad I am alive. Please give at least one big hug and one kiss for me. I have a personal vow to meet my lovely family one day. You hang tough my dear daughter and get well, their a lot to be done to get these kids on their way to healthy, happy productive lives. You are doing such a wonderful job, I can see your love in their eyes. I love you, mom.
posted by
sam444
on April 4, 2008 at 9:24 AM
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Purple
This one is very beautiful - a more positive tone than some of your other poems. I loved the softness of it.
posted by
Troosha
on April 4, 2008 at 7:20 AM
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purple
one more day to complete
posted by
Lanetay
on April 4, 2008 at 6:54 AM
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The truth laid bare so well in the written word my dear Jen
every day is a new day a new opportunity a new start... in short every day is another chance at life; excellent work dear heart; thank you and have a very blessed weekend
posted by
mariaki
on April 4, 2008 at 6:35 AM
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Wow! Great work, Mermaid!
posted by
strat
on April 4, 2008 at 6:00 AM
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I do agree with your statement. Thanks for the Nice poem and Amazing pic !
posted by
afzal50
on April 4, 2008 at 5:29 AM
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so beautiful...the morning and newness captured here! great work!
posted by
Ariala
on April 4, 2008 at 4:51 AM
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You expressed exactly my feelings when a new morning brakes. Yesterday may have been shit, but today is another day. Full of hope I can't wait to see what lies behind the next corner. And your images are so beautiful.
posted by
vogue
on April 4, 2008 at 2:04 AM
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Hi the Purple
You're a wonderful poetess Jen. I loved it so much, everything from top to bottom, the rhythm and the rhyme. My heartbeat has awakened with the wondrous gift from you and the sun. Such great fun - a new day. Roll that day on your tongue, relish the taste of freedom. Breathe deeply of the morning air, savor the fragrance of opportunity. Bhaskar.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 3, 2008 at 10:45 PM
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Always grand work, my friend...excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 3, 2008 at 10:39 PM
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something of value as always
posted by
jefco
on April 3, 2008 at 10:31 PM
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Yessss... there u go dear Jen..keep it up :) ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 3, 2008 at 8:04 PM
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yes babe....
posted by
Star5_
on April 3, 2008 at 7:01 PM
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Allelluia ~ this makes me want to sing praises, Jen. The rhythm and rhyme is powerful ~ You are amazing
from my heart to yours
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 3, 2008 at 5:04 PM
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Yes!
You nailed it again!
posted by
CRShelley
on April 3, 2008 at 4:58 PM
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