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Now this is poetry --- I love the "didgeridoo" --- and all the great imagery and yum...wallpaper paste (hmm, new one for me) ----Loved this Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 31, 2008 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

Pardon me Mr. Crossrhoads,

I got'ta thinkin' 'bout 'yer funny poem her' an' thought ta myself, hey self, maybe this here fine writer he bein' mighta' took (miss understewed) my bible 'script rendition az' a retort er' sompen' and thought I shud' clarify my sense of humor'

You have made me chuckle more than once! Keep it up fine writing person. Everyone's enjoying your work tremendously! (including me)!

posted by roadscross on March 30, 2008 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

What a fun dirge yourself!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 30, 2008 at 12:28 PM | link to this | reply

(speaking of derier-endowed)

A rear end rendition of Numbers 22; 

Ballam cried to the Lord “Oh, Alas
No more words from You now come to pass
Have You naught to impart
Through my mind or my heart?
God replied, “No, I speak through thine ass”

 

posted by roadscross on March 30, 2008 at 12:25 PM | link to this | reply