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screw patterns. Poetry is about feeling, everyone knows that. Your work is great, I'm not sure if I should give you praise, or envy you.........I think for know I'll choose to envy ;-)
posted by
acey
on October 30, 2003 at 10:41 PM
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here you go
i've read some of your stuff, and the only comment i have as of now is that your ryhme scheme is inconsistent at times. you should pick a pattern and stay with it, or not pick a pattern at all. maybe i'm just crazy. hope my criticism is helpful.
posted by
thefootstomper
on October 30, 2003 at 8:36 PM
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