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A mysterious journey indeed
mystery is always intriguing. lovely poem thank- you

posted by Kobriel on March 29, 2008 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

Blue
Sometimes when we're in that open passage which is void of time, we should just rest there for a moment.  Maybe it's not as forbidden as we think.... 

posted by Troosha on March 29, 2008 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

I like the allure of the forbidden!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 29, 2008 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

Sounds like some major astral projection!

posted by Ariala on March 29, 2008 at 4:02 AM | link to this | reply

Hope you have a happy voyage, Shailey

posted by Kayzzaman on March 28, 2008 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

Hmmm!!!
The forbidden was the key....you might be on to something. Intriguing poem, bluehands. I really like it...and I love that name..."bluehands!"

posted by metalrat on March 28, 2008 at 7:50 PM | link to this | reply

Mysterious journey! Good write!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 28, 2008 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

very well said my dear one...

 purple butterfly  woman


posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 28, 2008 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply