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Nice...the end is perfect and true.

posted by pen_dragon on March 27, 2008 at 9:07 AM | link to this | reply

How cleverly done is this my friend!
I would never have made that comparison but you are absolutely right!  Thank you

posted by mariaki on March 27, 2008 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

DESCRIPTION OF YOUR BLOG
I read the "about this blog", I totally relate to what it says.

posted by contagion_publishing on March 27, 2008 at 3:17 AM | link to this | reply

Sentiment and wisdom roled into one!
Very well written.

posted by Wigopa_ on March 26, 2008 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

This is excellent, truly outstanding Bashfulguy,  Bravo!!!

posted by Sinome on March 26, 2008 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

QG, this is priceless...the humility and insight into the human psyche..
that you gain from this "lowly" job is worth far more than any graduate degrees or worldly wealth that one may acquire..I feel sooo proud of you ! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on March 26, 2008 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

quietguy
nicely done, but it reminds me of being a wife

posted by Lanetay on March 26, 2008 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful ! WEll said !

posted by afzal50 on March 26, 2008 at 6:30 PM | link to this | reply

This is such a good piece, I'm, left speechless

posted by Thomas_Cornish on March 26, 2008 at 6:25 PM | link to this | reply

this is so true

posted by Samantha39 on March 26, 2008 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

cool......

posted by Star5_ on March 26, 2008 at 4:32 PM | link to this | reply

This is powerful. The message is so clear and so very exact. You really did a fine job of writing this poem too!   sam

posted by sam444 on March 26, 2008 at 2:56 PM | link to this | reply

Very well made point! A lowly busboy is people too!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 26, 2008 at 2:14 PM | link to this | reply

Very well written quietguy! Sounds just a little like the way I'm treated
by everyone in the household!? Chris.

posted by Scramble on March 26, 2008 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

Very good quietguy and I thank you for reminding us here ~  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 26, 2008 at 12:18 PM | link to this | reply