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Wonderful flow. As for the sleep part, hmm. Wazz that? olhip
posted by
olhip50
on March 20, 2008 at 1:38 PM
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I thoroughly enjoyed your rhyme scheme! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 19, 2008 at 10:27 AM
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Very fun poem
Your eyes are getting heavier - you are becoming sleepy - lol
posted by
Rhisiart_Inside_Out
on March 19, 2008 at 8:17 AM
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cooool........we all get insomnia
posted by
Star5_
on March 18, 2008 at 10:00 PM
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A nice light touch to this!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 18, 2008 at 9:27 PM
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Sleepless nights..
so true how they come and go. Nicely put together.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 18, 2008 at 9:21 PM
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Ahhh yes, for some it is hard to shut it down ~ I find it that ways sometimes but, it catches up with me... So as I slip off here to my nightly vigil --- actually my nightly nap ~ I bid you g'nite...Shhhh...and until I read you again, ~
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 18, 2008 at 8:53 PM
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