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that was awesome
posted by
quietguy7
on March 25, 2008 at 12:08 PM
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nice touch, love
posted by
BC-A
on March 19, 2008 at 4:08 PM
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I like the style
posted by
pen_dragon
on March 19, 2008 at 9:36 AM
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Thank you for sharing. Nice job.
Ger
posted by
ger_musser
on March 19, 2008 at 8:59 AM
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Excellent!
posted by
Katray2
on March 19, 2008 at 7:22 AM
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thank you
Thank you to everyone who responded.
posted by
thecryptkeeper
on March 18, 2008 at 3:26 PM
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I adore the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 18, 2008 at 10:03 AM
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Profound indeed !
posted by
afzal50
on March 18, 2008 at 8:23 AM
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Blue
Don't let those ripples stop! Nicely done....
posted by
Troosha
on March 18, 2008 at 6:31 AM
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Re; Ripples
I liked it and I wouldn't say so if it wasn't true. To be brutally honest, I don't really care for reading most personal poetry because I don't know how the poet was feeling as it was written. Either that, or I get hit over the head by the poet shouting EXACTLY how they felt while writing it! This was pleasant and enjoyable. Well done, Blue!
Guy
posted by
northsage_45
on March 18, 2008 at 6:05 AM
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we sure learn so much every step of the way my dear bluehand...this is subtle yet potent dear.....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 18, 2008 at 12:09 AM
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bluehands
Well done, nice poetry.
posted by
Justi
on March 17, 2008 at 11:20 PM
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this is put together well, I like the flow
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on March 17, 2008 at 11:14 PM
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Well captured life.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 17, 2008 at 11:12 PM
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