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A dreamy, haunting feel..
Nice work!

posted by Katray2 on March 19, 2008 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

very imaginative it has a musicality.

posted by chiq on March 19, 2008 at 3:56 AM | link to this | reply

Parting is hard to do!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 17, 2008 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

I loved the imagery too!  sam

posted by sam444 on March 17, 2008 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply

Great imagery here!
I could feel the loneliness of it all. Nicely done

posted by Wigopa_ on March 16, 2008 at 10:55 PM | link to this | reply