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purple
the journey continues on

posted by Lanetay on March 14, 2008 at 10:27 PM | link to this | reply

Came to see my Purple once again

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 14, 2008 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

Every blogger must read this

posted by Thomas_Cornish on March 14, 2008 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you all so so much!!!!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 14, 2008 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful as always, J...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on March 14, 2008 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply

Purple
Magically creative, as always...  although I try avoid thinking of yesterday as shaping today even though I know it does to some extend (I prefer to begin each day with a clean slate). You always take us on such a vivid and imaginative journey.... 

posted by Troosha on March 14, 2008 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

Jen, dear heart this is amazing.........
yet another piece of genius from a heart big enough to hold the world; thank you my friend; have an excellent weekend; peace and blessings always

posted by mariaki on March 14, 2008 at 5:39 AM | link to this | reply

So, we must live life to the fullest then!

posted by majesticvisions on March 14, 2008 at 2:37 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Purple has always a purple way of doing things so beautifully
I simply loved it and the video, what should it be called?

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 13, 2008 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

Great words....Even greater meaning. Well done as always. :-)

posted by Wigopa_ on March 13, 2008 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

I see your point! Not all of us were part of the wild bunch. We found we have other enemies!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 13, 2008 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

Loved this poem Mermaid, one of your best in my opinion,  the images, the message, the flow and the ending,  all beautiful.  Specially liked: "Rainbows are not magic wands, People don’t fly over them " So true my friend.  Truly a gifted piece. 

 

posted by Sinome on March 13, 2008 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply

everyday you amaze me dear one with your beautiful words.
A poem for today for this moment on time.

posted by Kabu on March 13, 2008 at 8:51 PM | link to this | reply

A wise man once said...
"Yesterday is like a cancelled check, tomorrow is like a promissory note, but today is like hard cash, spend it wisely"...r u a wise spender :) ? ! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on March 13, 2008 at 7:03 PM | link to this | reply

Ah, the picture book of life. A very engrossing poem, captures and holds the reader. i enjoyed creating my own cadence as well.  sam

posted by sam444 on March 13, 2008 at 6:31 PM | link to this | reply

truly excellent with wonderful insight!

posted by Ariala on March 13, 2008 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply

Ok ~ this is astounding poetry ~ WOW!  Take a Bow   Among the verse I picked My favorite line:

Today becomes the realistic version of yesterday ~

Simply great poetry here, ~ my dear Purple a re-read Elyse

 

posted by elysianfields on March 13, 2008 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply