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sam ~
Thank you very much. Peace and blessings.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 13, 2008 at 2:46 PM | link to this | reply

FineYoungSinger ~.
Thank you for visiting and commenting. Peace and blessings.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 13, 2008 at 2:43 PM | link to this | reply

quietguy ~
I've found, in my writing, that visuals are very effective in expressing emotion --this poem would not have been as effective without them. Thank you for commenting.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 13, 2008 at 2:40 PM | link to this | reply

Dave ~
Thank you -- thought I'd try something a little different...~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 13, 2008 at 2:30 PM | link to this | reply

mariaki ~
Thank you! Yes--it must be. "...blacker than a thousand midnights."~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 13, 2008 at 2:28 PM | link to this | reply

Elyse ~
Thank you! I really appreciate your comments.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 13, 2008 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply

Ash ~
Thank you for your comment and concern. Please see my entry: To Those Who Commented on "Losing... My...Self."~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 13, 2008 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

joab ~
Thank you for your comment and concern. Please see my entry: To Those Who Commented on "Losing... My...Self."~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 13, 2008 at 2:14 PM | link to this | reply

Comment on Losing... My...Self
You are becoming selfless.  Never a fun thing.  To see what has been ignored for so long is most painful.  Yet necessary for growth.  Assuming you are serious; for the self is NO PLAYTHING.joab

posted by joab1 on March 13, 2008 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply

SS, if this your soul speaking...
better get out & get some sunshine, take a walk..well-expressed ! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on March 13, 2008 at 12:35 PM | link to this | reply

Poignant and powerful. The layout is striking and enhances the meaning so very well.  sam

posted by sam444 on March 13, 2008 at 12:31 PM | link to this | reply

been there many times.....
well expressed!

posted by FineYoungSinger on March 13, 2008 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

those times are never good
however very creative way of writing about it esp the disappearing effect

posted by quietguy7 on March 13, 2008 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

I like the diminishing word-cascade used to emphasize your point! Very Original!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 13, 2008 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

What a terrible place to be............
thank goodness for the light creeping through gaps of darkness.......... this is very well done my friend; thank you

posted by mariaki on March 13, 2008 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

Very good poem...shows the decline, the fall into a muted quietness of a soul.   Agony - pain, can do this.  Very moving, touched me Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 13, 2008 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply