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Tis a longer story! Beyond the likes of you or me to solve!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 3, 2008 at 7:40 PM | link to this | reply

krjeffrey928 ~
...a quest for answers -- resolving  in truth, "...that's all."  Beautiful! Thank you for sharing.  ~SS

posted by soulspeaker on March 3, 2008 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

I understand. I appreciate. Success is a painful journey.

posted by EX_TURPI on March 3, 2008 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply

Love is what we all seek most often .

posted by afzal50 on March 3, 2008 at 4:58 AM | link to this | reply

Soul seeking question. Very nice poem! sam

posted by sam444 on March 3, 2008 at 3:28 AM | link to this | reply

jeffrey dear...........
welcome on board...boy, i know how this feels my dear...you just have to hang in there...pain eventually hits its natural death....just let it out and dont keep it in dear...keep writing...thank you for dropping by at my blog...hope to hear more from you...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 2, 2008 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

Nice and heartfelt poem.  :-) I liked the internal struggle it portrays, I guess we have all gone through it at one time or another.  Good job!

posted by Sinome on March 2, 2008 at 8:55 PM | link to this | reply

 Right on!

posted by BC-A on March 2, 2008 at 6:11 PM | link to this | reply