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I am impressed by the way you use the last two lines. Great conclusion.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on February 25, 2008 at 4:37 PM
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Well, I wish you'd have been saved by the end but still a wonderful poem!
posted by
Sincerity_Anna
on February 25, 2008 at 9:28 AM
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Kind readers...
your comments are inspirational beyond words. Thank you.
posted by
Simplerider
on February 24, 2008 at 11:08 AM
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The imagery was astounding, I want to write more but am spellbound. Chrylann did an outstanding job of critiquing and I couldn't improve on it so I will support her comment! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 24, 2008 at 7:22 AM
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The midst of a raging battle well told and vivid heart pounding of the
sparrow and the soothing, surrounding surrender of the flowing river; such variance of extreme emotion in one piece.......sensationally spectacular!
An award winning, 5-Star, ethereal experience! Bravo!
posted by
roadscross
on February 23, 2008 at 6:18 PM
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A tale well told in very dramatic fashion!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 23, 2008 at 5:40 PM
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