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Prob with 2nd stanza
"dazzling smile--lights up darkest room"
So she comes out of the white-bright dentist
smiles and sends everyone to moon
Completely hackneyed--though rest of poem reads fine
posted by
jfm32
on February 24, 2008 at 4:30 PM
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Many thanks for always appreciating my work BC-A and Sam :) -blessings!
posted by
lil_miss_emprezz
on February 24, 2008 at 2:07 AM
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In other
words, we get the picture through your
words, love.
posted by
BC-A
on February 23, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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Explosive ending. I like the build to the climax. Excellent concept and followed with picture perfect imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 23, 2008 at 9:23 AM
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