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Could it be the life-source that is missing? Its peeking through the eyes!!!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 22, 2008 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

image within a mirror always compels me~
It's amazing how your words weave an image of an image...very good ~ inspiring! ~Ely

posted by elysianfields on February 22, 2008 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

Sometimes it is just a mask
removed when we close our eyes.

posted by cpklapper on February 21, 2008 at 10:15 PM | link to this | reply

Most excellent poem. I was enchanted, mirror, mirror on the awesome poem once again!  sam

posted by sam444 on February 21, 2008 at 3:24 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Who Am I?
Very, very nice.

posted by soulspeaker on February 21, 2008 at 12:05 PM | link to this | reply

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Very nice rhythm to these questions you ask of yourself – sometimes we don’t like what we see in that mirror.  

posted by Troosha on February 21, 2008 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply