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Loved it...
Very descriptive of life on life's terms...
posted by
zoelovesprose
on February 21, 2008 at 1:07 AM
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Rhymes very well.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on February 20, 2008 at 1:48 PM
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Badda bing...this is Great.
the rhythm brings forth as lyrical. I really enjoyed this. Thank you.
posted by
elysianfields
on February 20, 2008 at 12:28 PM
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I suppose you are right in the eloquent imagery of this write! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 20, 2008 at 12:11 PM
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very clever
posted by
spinner
on February 20, 2008 at 11:55 AM
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Cross
So many clever lines!
fsh with no i , to name one....
posted by
Troosha
on February 20, 2008 at 11:26 AM
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