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A Master Piece of love you are something else the way you write, touchheart
posted by
Mystereo
on January 11, 2009 at 8:53 PM
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this is such a love story in poetry I had to read it twice. Thankyou
posted by
Kabu
on February 18, 2008 at 11:58 AM
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Sad if it is final...never quit.
posted by
ger_musser
on February 18, 2008 at 11:15 AM
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very sad
posted by
flappergirl
on February 18, 2008 at 6:59 AM
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A tear at the end so warmed my heart. Loss is such a tragic memory! Very well expressed. sam
posted by
sam444
on February 18, 2008 at 6:27 AM
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Thank you for leaving a comment to my blog entry
Maybe at the time the two shared a love they were not prepeared for the love, and all the things that come with loving someone enough to appreciate it, and needed to grow. This is great piece of work!
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 18, 2008 at 5:37 AM
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My dear Sinome............
you have just triggered memories I thought were forgotten........ this so describes my failed marriage! But fortunately I retained the best part, my two wonderful boys, which reduces any regrets; thank you this was excellent
posted by
mariaki
on February 18, 2008 at 2:12 AM
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oh my Sinome............
you almost made my story....almost...that was larger than life reality sweetheart...nothing is permanent but 'change' really...lovely dear...lovely...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on February 17, 2008 at 10:59 PM
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Sinome
I greatly love stories in poetry, and you have done a wonderful job in this, saying also about the impermanence of Love. Reminds me of the story where it did not start with love, but of its being shunned, until one day when it became too late, and, when the longing for Love arose, nothing could be done - it became permanent in that sense. Yes, I am telling here of the Greek mythological story of Narcissus and Echo.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on February 17, 2008 at 10:38 PM
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oh my godness I know I know....
some how we all feel the same in someway,
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on February 17, 2008 at 9:57 PM
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