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Hmmmm, I can't make up my mind about you,  Sometimes I think you are one of those deep thinkers out there that like to disguise their wisdom with humor, others I feel you are just a talented fellow out to have a good time doing what he does best, write.  I liked your poem, well written and opened for interpretation.  Specially liked the "destitute Spirit Guide" :-) . I think it drives the point in.  That and the clapping the hands while tying your shoes lol,  that was a good one also. Take care John

posted by Sinome on February 16, 2008 at 11:42 AM | link to this | reply

posted by PearTree on February 15, 2008 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

i liked
Yours--- good job.
The Rine wasn't supposed to look like a christmas tree-- but i guess it looks good that way :)  I changed the font also-- wasn't aware it was so small... oops! 
thanks for the laugh tho-- :)

posted by TheWifey on February 15, 2008 at 2:35 PM | link to this | reply

Fresh approach!  sam

posted by sam444 on February 15, 2008 at 2:06 PM | link to this | reply

Can you teach me?
Good Write! Naked Pictures Of Voices In My Head

posted by CRShelley on February 15, 2008 at 1:45 PM | link to this | reply