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What I liked most was 'carnal shroud' although the wrap up and most fitting found my mind traveling in at least three directions. The poem's intent, my view of carnal shroud, and the fact that it serves as an oxymoron as well. This is absolute genius to allow a poem to travel on its own like that! Well done. sam
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sam444
on February 14, 2008 at 3:32 PM
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Another Really Good Job!
I loved this!
Naked Pictures Of Voices In My Head
posted by
CRShelley
on February 14, 2008 at 3:23 PM
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WOW
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on February 14, 2008 at 11:19 AM
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Well written mama_joy! Chris.
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Scramble
on February 14, 2008 at 8:49 AM
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Happy reading
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Kayzzaman
on February 14, 2008 at 8:32 AM
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tyleness
on February 14, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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