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one cannot write enough verse re: hope. thank you!
posted by
bluebossa
on February 12, 2008 at 3:54 PM
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Excellent change!
posted by
Ariala
on February 10, 2008 at 12:57 PM
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So wonderfull mama_joy---and yes---HOPE! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on February 10, 2008 at 10:12 AM
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Nice and good
posted by
Kayzzaman
on February 10, 2008 at 9:57 AM
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Most enjoyable poem. I found myself lost in the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 10, 2008 at 5:26 AM
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mama, very well written poem! Love the imagery...for what it's worth, and
forgive me if I overstep my bounds, but that first line is cliche and overused...I hate to see a good poem compromised by a line from a song or some other poem...You've got a great poem here! Make every line unique!
posted by
Ariala
on February 10, 2008 at 5:03 AM
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