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How
cute!
posted by
KaBooM62
on January 22, 2008 at 4:37 AM
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Another charming ditty!!!!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on January 20, 2008 at 7:01 PM
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LOL...gee thanks for sneezing on me...okay, you asked for it, so here
I am. First of all, I really get annoyed at rhymes except for nursery rhymes for kids, however, this poem was clever and made me laugh, so you get points for that, but my PERSONAL preference is no rhymes. Still, you really describe how you feel well...but what if you tried writing this poem without telling us the problem?
Don't hate me. LOL
posted by
Ariala
on January 20, 2008 at 7:20 AM
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Very good. I loved the concept and the flow so to speak! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 20, 2008 at 2:45 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on January 19, 2008 at 6:23 PM
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I hope you're feeling better-real soon mama_joy! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on January 19, 2008 at 11:56 AM
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