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Re: punctuation
yeah i could use some more of it, some times i re read and re read and punctuate here and punctuate there ....but most times you read what i wrote as i typed it out, no changes
posted by
twomany
on January 21, 2008 at 1:48 AM
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twomany-----days have passed since I've read your work, my friend.
this is a great poem...dark, tormented. I love it.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on January 16, 2008 at 5:40 AM
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You can always win. That is your choice. Good piece.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on January 15, 2008 at 3:49 PM
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Of couse you can win! I so enjoyed the lack of punctuation so I could create my own cadence although it did lead me! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 15, 2008 at 2:23 PM
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Very nicely expressed
posted by
Kayzzaman
on January 15, 2008 at 4:29 AM
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