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To outwit the fox is to dine
with hens? Methinks not...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on January 12, 2008 at 10:47 AM | link to this | reply

So that means you aren't going to tell me, huh!  Excelllent little write, my friend.  sam

posted by sam444 on January 11, 2008 at 3:55 PM | link to this | reply

Cute and curious.

posted by BC-A on January 11, 2008 at 2:44 PM | link to this | reply

A surprise in just four lines.

Cool to get from the abstract secrets to a very real (and, most likely, nosy) fox that snatches a very real (albeit a bit clumsy) hen ;) Oh, that was just my imagination flowing off the margins of the poem which is a sign of a good poem, isn't it?

posted by hagi on January 11, 2008 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

posted by FineYoungSinger on January 11, 2008 at 1:59 PM | link to this | reply

You are good!
All of your postings today were rich!

posted by CRShelley on January 11, 2008 at 1:22 PM | link to this | reply

Cute !

posted by ash_pradhan on January 11, 2008 at 1:14 PM | link to this | reply