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Ah, the age of maturation. I also wanted to note that you handle dialogue very well. Descriptions are well done only revealing enough at a time to get the character going, which I find to be extremely positive.  sam

posted by sam444 on January 15, 2008 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply